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HEY Folks!! Id Love some critique on my first full project!

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HEY Folks!! Id Love some critique on my first full project!

Postby Eggmanslim » Wed Jan 29, 2014 2:05 pm

So i finally finished my very first full animation. I guess not so full cuz its only a minute and a half but its full as in it has music sound effects blah blah blah! Ive been developing the story behind the character development for yeeearss now!! so if its seems like theres a lot more going on..THERE IS! starting a webcomic series very soon!! Just gonna put out a couple shorts bout the characters XD
I did everything in the video from backgrounds to music and voices etc.
anyways Ive wasted enough of your time
tell me what you think!

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Re: HEY Folks!! Id Love some critique on my first full proje

Postby Charles » Wed Jan 29, 2014 6:39 pm

For your first time out you did a good job. Animation is a lot of work as you're discovering no doubt. My advice is to stick with your project and improve upon it with every new aspect you create. Think about the staging of your scenes. You can create a bigger impact with some closeups in areas that could benefit from more of a dramatic impact. Your line quality can be improved upon. Use cinematics in the development of your visuals. Here's a good blog to go to where you can learn more about staging and visual storytelling...

http://cswstoryboard.blogspot.com/

Thanks for posting and good luck! Looking forward to future episodes.
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Re: HEY Folks!! Id Love some critique on my first full proje

Postby Eggmanslim » Wed Jan 29, 2014 9:59 pm

Hey Charles Thanks so much for the feedback!! Ill def. keep your words in mind! Ill also have a look at that blog! I want to be the best animator i can be so any tips and advice is great for me! Thanks for your time! :D
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