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My stop motion honours project

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My stop motion honours project

Postby JonCee500 » Wed Mar 20, 2013 4:41 pm

This is my final degree project which is about Herbert, a simple factory worker, who has a day unlike any other. This animation was created using claymation.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2Aeg_kqu92s

Feedback and ways of improvement would be great! Thanks :)
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Re: My stop motion honours project

Postby Charles » Thu Mar 21, 2013 7:54 am

Thanks for posting your video. You put a lot of work into this. Enjoyed watching it. One suggestion I have is to focus on your timing a little more. There's areas where the motion is a bit sluggish. You can pick things up a little more here and there to get a more realistic and natural feel to the movement. That said, let's embed your video for all to see...

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Re: My stop motion honours project

Postby JonCee500 » Thu Mar 21, 2013 8:39 am

Thanks for the feedback Charles, much appreciated. Indeed, I spent a serious amount of time on this project and thoroughly enjoyed it. The main issues I feel need improved is the walk cycle of the character. However, I do agree that some points in the piece are quite sluggish.
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