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[Hmansion]

Hello, new here I was just looking for some input on my cartoon blog. Thanks!

http://hovermansion.wordpress.com/

[Charles]

Welcome to AN.

Some of your cartoons are witty, and in others the humor falls a little flat or a bit hard to follow. I see where you're coming from artistically, but you need to develop your style further. Also, you need some training in fundamentals of design and composition.

Try and get the color to reach the line work. With most of your drawings the black line has a white edge to it and it affects the quality of your art.

You do have a considerable amount of content, and I can see that you're creatively productive. That's very positive. Get your fundamentals down and keep producing these cartoons. In time you'll develop a unique feel and humorous statement and you'll expand your following as a result.

Thanks for posting here. Good luck and let us know how you progress.

[Hmansion]

Thanks for your input I really appreciate it!