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My animation for kids - Crazy Hammer

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My animation for kids - Crazy Hammer

Postby Kiddytv » Fri Nov 01, 2013 7:41 am

Hi guys!
Here is my first 3D animation.

I need your comments, advices etc. Because I dont see what good, what bad - anymore.



Thanks a lot!
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Re: My animation for kids - Crazy Hammer

Postby Charles » Fri Nov 01, 2013 5:27 pm

Hi there Kiddytv. Enjoyed your video. Here's my take on it. Very colorful and very impressive for your first 3D animation. Good production quality. Besides the central character making physical contact with the other characters popping out of the craters there's not much interaction between them. I'd say that if there was interplay between all the characters that helped define who they are and what they're about your video will be more engaging. Hope this helps and good luck!
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Re: My animation for kids - Crazy Hammer

Postby Charles » Fri Nov 01, 2013 8:34 pm

Use those excellent skills you've developed to tell a story! :)
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