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New Animation Short

Postby eW26 » Fri Apr 20, 2012 9:55 am

Hey there. I just finished another animation. I hope you like it. Most of the animations I have done are based on jokes I've used in stand up, so I've tried to give people more to look at during the animation as well as put more detail into the characters. Also. if you haven't looked yet I put the second episode of Techs on my New Web Series thread. Thanks
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Re: New Animation Short

Postby Charles » Fri Apr 20, 2012 4:31 pm

Getting your animation and production design on par with your writing and wit will help you take these short films to a higher level.

I really like the humor / punchline / hook for your film. But take a look at the doctor's arm. It's as if he has two elbows. Improve the graphic aspect of your videos, the composition, staging, design, etc, you'll see the difference this will make in the overall quality of your films.

That said, I see the improvement over your previous videos and appreciate your sharing your work with us on the Gallery. Keep it up and have fun. Looking forward to what you'll be doing next.
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