My April 11SecondClub Progress

[Car t00n]

Hi there everyone

I wasn't satisfied with last months animation. My animation lacked lots of things that were needed but I am determined to get better! I will post my progress on this thread and PLEASE oh PLEASE leave feedback. I don't care if its, "Gosh dang it this is the worst animation I've EVER seen!" Just please leave some feedback so I can grow as an animator during this progress.



Thanks

toonyanimator@gmail.com

[Charles]

The good: This is animated!
Much better than your previous video.
Here it is for comparison...

viewtopic.php?f=3&t=3275

I really like how you have the character moving around and communicating with its body. Nice job on the lip sync.

The could be better: You really need to work on design.
Character could be much more appealing.
There's a lot of room for improvement on a fundamental level.
For one, get to the point where you can include fingers on the hands.

Overall: A big improvement in a positive direction.

[Car t00n]

Thanks for the advice. I'll start working on the fingers/hands plus the cleanup of lines.

How is the lip sync? Anything to change there?

[Charles]

Lip syncs are okay. They work. There's bigger issues to focus on overall. Get your design abilities up to par to match what you're doing with the animation and you'll see the difference this makes in the quality of your videos.