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Senor Chang - Community Fan Animation

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Senor Chang - Community Fan Animation

Postby oknplm » Sun Feb 26, 2012 12:35 pm

Hey guys,

I've been working on this for a couple of days and I'd really love to hear what you guys think of it. I can already pick it apart already but there might be somethings I could have missed. Thanks!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vv88cEzqBww
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Re: Senor Chang - Community Fan Animation

Postby Charles » Sun Feb 26, 2012 5:40 pm

Here's the video for all to see...

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Re: Senor Chang - Community Fan Animation

Postby Charles » Tue Feb 28, 2012 10:45 pm

It's looking pretty good. I'd say the biggest issue I see with your video is the staging. I think the characters are too far away from the camera and the composition is a bit bland, especially in the second scene where they're at the desks. Consider reworking this aspect of it.

Thanks for posting your animation here and good luck with the project
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