Senor Chang - Community Fan Animation

[oknplm]

Hey guys,

I've been working on this for a couple of days and I'd really love to hear what you guys think of it. I can already pick it apart already but there might be somethings I could have missed. Thanks!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vv88cEzqBww

[Charles]

Here's the video for all to see...

[Charles]

It's looking pretty good. I'd say the biggest issue I see with your video is the staging. I think the characters are too far away from the camera and the composition is a bit bland, especially in the second scene where they're at the desks. Consider reworking this aspect of it.

Thanks for posting your animation here and good luck with the project