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Ryan the Ninja

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Ryan the Ninja

Postby Car t00n » Sun Feb 19, 2012 2:54 pm

A new test/short thing! Check it out and leave some feedback!

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Re: Ryan the Ninja

Postby Charles » Wed Feb 22, 2012 2:38 pm

Your character floats as he flips. We're not getting the feel that he has weight. Maybe that's what you intended, but at this point in the development of your animation skills try animating the action in a more convincing manner. A little more anticipation when he prepares to jump, timing his loop in the air a little better, and also landing squarely on his feet.

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