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Critiques requested

Postby Bonezi » Sat Mar 12, 2011 11:04 pm

Hello Animation Nation!

I was wondering if anyone out there could give me a few critiques on some of my latest works. Below are links to some current work I would really like to get some feedback on:

Concept Zero Headphones (3D Model):
http://bonezi.deviantart.com/art/Zero-Headphones-196861012

Scruffy, Aerial Strike Mode (2D Illus.):
http://bonezi.deviantart.com/art/Scruffy-Aerial-Strike-200734115

Onyx and Spade with O Logo (2D Illus.):
http://bonezi.deviantart.com/art/Onyx-and-Spade-with-Logo-187852817

8-Bit Onyx (2D Sprite):
http://bonezi.deviantart.com/art/8-Bit-Onyx-196965100

Any advice or feedback on even a single work is greatly appreciated. I'm always looking for ways to improve, so any input will be put to great use!
My blog:
http://secretplansandprojects.blogspot.com/

Current Projects:
-Onyx Book 1 (Novel)
-Onyx Book 2 (Novel)
-Scruffy iPhone Games
-Scruffy Comics/Cartoons
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Re: Critiques requested

Postby Charles » Mon Mar 14, 2011 7:58 pm

Nice, simple, clean designs.

Keep developing the thematic narrative, the idea behind your concept. Come up with more characters. Stick with it, stay focused, be open to suggestions and alternative ways of doing things and have fun with it it.

Good luck and keep us updated. I'm interested in seeing where this goes.
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Re: Critiques requested

Postby dorito » Wed May 04, 2011 5:30 pm

scruffy looks pretty cool.
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