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Aspiring TV Animator's Humorous Short: Opinions Welcome!

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Aspiring TV Animator's Humorous Short: Opinions Welcome!

Postby piratefish » Wed Feb 02, 2011 4:48 pm

Hey, guys. I just recently finished a humorous short and I'd really like to know what you guys think about it. Here's the link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=96ZKgv5SUrU

Premise: Silly little shorts inspired by different genres of music. Not meant to be taken seriously...

Anyways, I hope you all enjoy it!
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Re: Aspiring TV Animator's Humorous Short: Opinions Welcome!

Postby Charles » Mon Feb 07, 2011 11:14 pm

For what it is, I think you did fine. The production quality was a little better in the "country" part of the film.




I enjoyed this one better. It had a stronger narrative and your animation was an improvement, especially on the Mexican dancer.




Focus on your line quality and you'll get a more appealing result. Thanks for posting your animation, it was a fun watch.
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Re: Aspiring TV Animator's Humorous Short: Opinions Welcome!

Postby piratefish » Wed Feb 09, 2011 9:01 pm

Thanks for responding, Charles. It always helps me to get an objective response. If there is anything else you can suggest, please feel free to let me know. I think I'm going to start on a new project soon which should have a strong narrative done with a little twist. I think you'll enjoy it.
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