Aspiring TV Animator's Humorous Short: Opinions Welcome!

[piratefish]

Hey, guys. I just recently finished a humorous short and I'd really like to know what you guys think about it. Here's the link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=96ZKgv5SUrU

Premise: Silly little shorts inspired by different genres of music. Not meant to be taken seriously...

Anyways, I hope you all enjoy it!

[Charles]

For what it is, I think you did fine. The production quality was a little better in the "country" part of the film.




I enjoyed this one better. It had a stronger narrative and your animation was an improvement, especially on the Mexican dancer.




Focus on your line quality and you'll get a more appealing result. Thanks for posting your animation, it was a fun watch.

[piratefish]

Thanks for responding, Charles. It always helps me to get an objective response. If there is anything else you can suggest, please feel free to let me know. I think I'm going to start on a new project soon which should have a strong narrative done with a little twist. I think you'll enjoy it.